Horace Miner on the Nacerima People
(Part A)
If I were to describe the Nacirema people based on Horace Miner’s description of them, these are the five words I would chose.
If I were to describe the Nacirema people based on Horace Miner’s description of them, these are the five words I would chose.
1. punctilious: First word to describe the Nacirema people
is punctilious, which is strict or exact in the observance of the formalities
or amenities of conduct or actions. Most things the Nacirema people did
involved a certain ritual; it involved a strict or exact way to do something.
One ritual they have involves a mouth-rite because they had a fascination with
the mouth. Miner does not specifically say what the Nacirema people do in order
to perform the ritual, but it does state that “the daily body ritual…” which
implies everyone does this ritual everyday. The text does state that the ritual
involves “small bundle of hog hairs into the mouth, along with certain magical
powders, and then moving the bundle in a highly formalized series of gestures.”
The fact that the Nacirema people had plenty of rituals makes me believe they
can be describe as punctilious.
2. ceremonious: Although the Nacirema people do not
necessarily do rituals or other honorable things in extreme ceremony
(celebration/ party), I do believe that they do ceremonies in a more quiet way.
Nacirema people do have plenty of rituals and Miner names a few, but one
ceremony that was mentioned was about the shrines. Again, although this “ceremony”
is not loud like what some of us may be accustomed to, I do believe it is their
way to celebrate. This certain ceremony is based on power. If you carry more power
you in the society, you would have one or more shrines on your household. Miner
says, “in fact, the opulence of a house is often referred to in terms of the
number of such ritual centers it possessed.” Even those who are poorer try to “imitate
the rich by applying pottery plaques to their shrine walls” says Miner. This
may be different to our everyday ceremonies, but none the less, I believe the
Nacirema people have a different way of doing things.
3. unique: Reading the previous two paragraphs, one can
already get an understanding on why I chose to describe the Nacerima people as unique.
I am not implying that unique is bad or good, but rather different. I would say
especially different to what I personally am used to. Never have I heard about
a ritual in which people put hog hairs into their mouths. To continue about the
topic on teeth, the Nacerima people go to a “holy-mouth-man” for exorcism
rituals. According to Miner, this ritual “involves almost unbelievable ritual
torture of the client.” He continues to say that tools are used to “enlarge any
holes which decay may have created in the teeth.” I do not remember the last
time someone went to another person (even a dentist) in order for a mouth
ritual to be preformed. This is just one other way in which the Nacerima people
are unique. They have strong believes in something, I personally do not believe
in.
4. private: Despite the fact that Nacerima people go to
other people for help (such as a holy-mouth-man), I would say they are private
people. “While each family has at least one such shrine, the rituals associated
with it are not family ceremonies, but are private and secret” says Miner. He
also says that the shrine rituals are actually just shared with children and
only when they are concerned about the mysteries. Miner got an exclusive explanation on a shrine ritual. The fact that the Nacerima people keep
something so sacred (or so secretive) allows me to believe they are private
people. There is nothing wrong with being private, but personally I would love
to share something that means so much to me with more than just my family. Here
it says that the Nacerima people do not even do a ceremony that involves their
family.
5. dissatisfied: My previous paragraphs can also explain why
I believe the Nacerima people can be described as dissatisfied. They have mouth
rituals (because of decaying teeth) and they have shrine rituals (based on
power). Both of these examples show ways in which they want to make themselves
seem different. Even the poor try to imitate the rich. Most of the rituals
involve gifts to whomever worked their “magic” on them. The sick go to a temple
(or latipso) in order for people to perform ceremonies in which help them get
better. These people are so dissatisfied with being sick that they are willing
to go and spend money on places that children would describe as ‘that is where
you go to die.’ I understand we may go to doctors and spend plenty of money
there, but we know we are going to get help, not get worse. Last example would
be that the Nacerima people are not satisfied with their naked bodies. They
only expose themselves when it comes to body-rite rituals.
-Araceli
(Part B)
(Part B)
1. As an American, I feel I have chosen five words that I do
not personally would describe Americans. I describe Americans (according to
part a) as punctilious, ceremonious, unique, private, and dissatisfied.
Although the words themselves are a way to describe Americans, the explanations
on why are not entirely what I would think about them. I wrote punctilous and I
still agree with that because Americans like things done a certain (struct)
way. I continue to believe Americans are ceremonious, but I would not
necessarily describe their ceremonies as “quiet.” On the contrary, I believe
their (our) ceremonies are loud. I still would consider Americans to be unique,
private and dissatsifed. Americans are different and follow certain ways of
doing things and therefore they’re unique. Although Americans have ceremonies
that I said are “loud,” I still think they can be private at a certain extent.
I mean social media is a big thing. Lastly, I do think Ameicans are
dissatisfied because I believe they always want more (which I do not consider
to be bad).
2. I would say that some of my word choices exhibit
ethnocentrism. I would say all my words are free of bias, but the explanation
used for each one may be biased because I compared the Nacerima people to what
I an accustomed to.
-I would not necessarily say calling Nacerima people
punctilious is biased. Saying that they have rituals in which everything has to
be perfectly and strictly done may be bias because Americans are this way and I
compared it to the way Americans are.
-Again, I would not say calling Nacerima people ceremonies
is based on bias thoughts. What I would say is bias is comparing Nacirema way
of celebrating verses my way of celebrating. I said Nacerima people are quiet
in celebration verses what I am accustomed to, which is loud celebrations.
-Nacerima people are unique and I would not call this
biased. Also my explanation, I would say is not bias either. I even stated that
being unique is nothing good or bad, just a different way of doing things.
There is nothing wrong with being differet.
-Being called private I would say is not a bias description.
Although I did compare the Nacerima to what I am used to and therefore I say
the explanation is biased. Being private is not bad, but it is not something I
am entirely used to.
-I would say neither being called dissatisfied or my
explanation to it is biased because it is just the mentality. There is nothing
wrong with people wanting more and trying to accomplish more.
3. I could change punctilious to precise. Also I could
change ceremonious to formal. Changing these two words could make the
description seem less bias.
4. Based on this experience, I say it is important to avoid
ethnocentric judgments when describing other cultures. If you do not take yourself
out of the equation and focus on the other culture you are studying,, I do not
think there would be room to learn. Every piece of information presented to you
would be me vs them (or me compared to them). I think it is important to grab
the other cultures information and ask why rather than compare it to ourselves.
I think with a lot of practice it is certainly possible to be unbias. 100%
unbias is probably hard to accomplish just because our own culture will always
be in the back our heads, even as anthropologists. Like the article stated even when we think we are not
being ethnocentric, we just might be because it comes out naturally.
Part A reviewed and scored. I will leave a longer comment on Friday after your Part B submission.
ReplyDeleteI agree with your response regarding the importance of avoiding ethnocentric judgments when describing other cultures. If we focus on other cultures, then we will be able to learn from the people. It's very hard to take ourselves and our views out of the picture but you made a great point. Many of us judge other cultures if we disagree with a certain behavior but we should ask questions instead like you mentioned. It will definitely be a challenge to completely avoid ethnocentric judgments but it's possible with practice.
ReplyDeleteYes, Lilly I agree that we should ask questions and challenge ourselves to avoid being ethnocentric.
DeleteThank You!
Reading through Part A of your blog, I thought you chose your words well with no signs of bias or judgement. I agree with your terms, particularly punctilious and private. These terms I used in my blog as well. I also feel as an American these terms are something we can relate heavily to. Also on number four of part B, I enjoyed your deep thinking. I do feel that when we research and describe others, we tend to compare ourselves to them. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you Danielle for your comment and I too would say that it can be hard not to compare ourselves to "different" ways (other cultures).
DeleteHello student anthologist and thank you for your post. I read your post and I would agree with you that there are similarities with the words you used to describe the Nacerima which Americans, however the question I have for you is can we really be free of bias? I appreciate those who say they can, but it makes me curious to know if this is actually true?
ReplyDeleteGood discussion on your impression of the descriptors you chose for the American culture (keeping in mind that this is the American culture several decades ago). Do you think your choices were colored or shaped by the bias Minor intentionally included in his article? What does this say about the dangers of communicating and spreading bias via anthropological writings?
ReplyDeleteI agree that "punctilious" is not really biased, and with our obsession (oops... bias!) with time and schedules, I tend to agree that we are much more punctilious than other cultures. I also agree that "ceremonious" and "private" are generally less prone to bias. While "unique" is not really biased, how useful is it? Don't all cultures have unique qualities to them?
I would actually suggest that "dissatisfied" is biased and judgmental (suggesting that they should be satisfied) as it carries with it a negative connotation and may not accurately explain why Americans act as they do. Do they care for their teeth and see the dentist because they are "dissatisfied"? Or for health reasons? Do they buy more stuff because they are "dissatisfied"? Or because they want to provide their families with a better life? There may be positive reasons for their actions and "dissatisfied" doesn't suggest this.
I would have liked to see a possible replacement for the word "dissatisfied". With regard to the mouth rituals, this is perhaps "health conscious"?
"I think it is important to grab the other cultures information and ask why rather than compare it to ourselves."
Precisely.
But this goes beyond just trying to understand cultures from their perspective. Recognize that in order to complete this assignment, you had to read Minor's article. We know now that this was a spoof article, but this is how information on different cultures is communicated in the scientific community. It is very easy to allow bias slip into our writings and we are at risk of passing on that bias (as Minor did, albeit intentionally) to our readers. Yes, it is impossible to prevent all bias in our writings, but just by being aware of it, we can better guard against this.
Great response Student Anthropologist. I believe some of your words could be taken out of context to prove that in fact the Nacirema Culture did not feel that way. Though that is the question we are trying to find, I believe we need to have a better understanding of words and how that one word could be taken wrong. Instead of describing their beliefs or values, I would consider describing their actions, but actions that describe the population and not what they believe. That stays away from negative connotations and allows one to see what is actually going on. Although the assignment wanted descriptive words, which are adjectives, I find that it is hard to describe something to an outsider is unknown to the researcher on a belief or value without being enthocentric.
ReplyDeleteLovely discussion, a good post to read. I like how you go into saying that none of your words are biased but give reasonable explanations to why. You give not only your thoughts to why you believe they aren't bias but use examples to show why you think they aren't.
ReplyDeleteWhile reading your blog i did not see signs of bias. I believe that you used explanations of the culture and yours but did not show any judgement. This assignment was difficult because it was describing a culture but I believe you did an excellent job not being bias.
ReplyDeleteThis was a thorough discussion on the topic especially afterwards with your analysis of the words in part b. It seems that a lot of us struggled to analyze whether the our words of choice were free from any bias or not, then following to replace them. I agree that it is difficult to avoid ethnocentric judgements while making observations such as these.
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